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3. Plan of criticism Peter Newmark(2001) puts forward a mode of criticism intranslation. His plan of criticism in his Translation Textbook includes these topics:a brief analysis of the source language message, stressing its intention andits functional aspects; the translator’s interpretation of the source languagetext’s purpose, his translation method and the translation’s likely readership;a selective but representative detailed comparison of the translation with theoriginal; an evaluation of the translation’s term and in the critic’s terms. 内容来自论文无忧网 www.paper51.com In this paper, following Newmark’s translation criticism method,I first make a brief description of the poet’s intention and languagestructure, and then give an introduction of translation methods. In chapter 4, Igive an evaluation of ten versions by comparing the title, each line, phonetic beautyand form effect. copyright paper51.com
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